Today's blog is all about Essay 3. I am feeling very overwhelmed. I have all this information I have been learning and I don't know how to put it into words. Overwhelmed is an understatement. It is very easy for me to complete quizzes where I can find the answers in reading or complete a small assignment. But when it comes to writing, for some reason it becomes very difficult for me. In chapter 7 So what? who cares? I didn't really understand what it was telling me to do. And how do I incorporate that into my essay? I have started the introduction of this rough draft and I have brainstormed a little bit but as far as the rhetorical appeals, I am also a little confused. I am definitely ready to write an essay with my argument that Athletes should not travel during covid. I will research different stats and put that in the essay. But like I said we have just been learning so much and it's a lot for me right now. I am excited to see tomorrow what I can accomplish.
Today I took the day off to make sure I did all my school work. But I work up to text messages my mom fainted in the building she lived in from her blood sugar. She has diabetes. Someone found her in the hallway. She was unresponsive and rushed to the hospital. Luckily they were able to bring her back to stable condition. I was very upset all day. My mom lives in Florida so I felt helpless. I found myself making phone calls all day. My family and I were all scared. When I talked to her she forgot where I lived. Why did this have to happen on the day I took off to get my school work? It was a terrible day. Thankfully she is doing much better. She is still admitted in the hospital. I started to revise my essay around 8 pm. When I was done, I was extremely proud of myself. I feel like this revised essay is so much better than my first essay. I have a really good feeling that I will keep learning and get better and better at writing. Yes, repetition. Repetition is how I am going to le...
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