This week when I was writing my rough draft essay I pictured myself as an actual story teller. It kind of helped me. I added things in my essay like"my palms were sweaty and I could hear the clock ticking" to try and draw in the readers, I still need to remember and try to understand how exactly to make things AS CLEAR as possible because I am hearing everything that I am learning. I just need to know how to actually do that now. I am thinking about talking to to a tutor for this class too. Maybe they can just help me understand when it comes to my assignments. How to do it all these things I am learning with my assignments. What the argument exactly is? and etc. In my essay this week I tried to incorporate how I felt before and what I gained after. 

Also, I really like the video of the girl talking about the looter and rioters and working with our classmates and discussing the video. That was fun. At first I felt bad for her but then I realized she just wants a reason to loot. The WHY: because your poor and you want those flashy things soooooooo your blaming slavery from a million years ago. andddddddddddddddddd look HOW? oprah winfrey made it. Kanye west made it. Get a job. Stop looting. 

Am I being to harsh? I don't mean to sound mean. Because I am just really against looting.

I am all for BLM. but not looting and rioting.

I really want to do more thought questions with our classmates. I personally liked that. Thank you.